Language
Most of the story “Weekend” by Fay Weldon is conveyed in the narrative mode and using short sentences. Direct speech is only used from time to time and it helps convey the way the characters talk, which reveals something about their personalities.
The choice of words reflects the context of the story and helps create motifs and symbols. Numerous words are related to food, domestic chores, and family life which are meant to emphasise the theme of traditional gender roles: “But no potatoes peeled, no breakfast cleared, nothing. Cigarette ends still amongst old toast, bacon rind and marmalade.” (ll. 383-384)
The language of the short story appeals to the readers through numerous instances of sarcasm and irony which reflect the main character’s frustrations with her husband or some of the guests at their cottage: “Mind you, Martha could see the power of such...
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Similes and metaphors
A few similes and metaphors help the author convey Martha’s perspective as well as deeper meanings about the underlying conflicts.
The simile “as if speaking to a servant in a time of shortage of staff” (ll. 310-311) conveys the idea that Martha feels that Katie’s attitude towards her is disrespectful and condescending.
The simile “like some treasure.” (l. 371) compares young Katie with a treasure and helps convey Martha’s sarcasm towards the fact that Colin abandoned his family for his mistress.
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Repetitions
Repetitions are constantly used in the text, often in conjunction with enumerations. These repetitions are sometimes ironical: “They reckoned themselves fortunate, how fortunate!” (ll. 12-13). The reality is that Martha does not consider herself fortunate, but lies to herself.
On other occasions they help convey the idea that the character is overwhelmed with domestic chores:
…plus the weekend food - acquired at intervals throughout the week, to lessen the load - plus her own folder of work from the office, plus Martin's drawing materials (she was a market researcher in an advertising agency, he a freelance designer) plus hairbrushes, jeans, spare T-shirts… (ll. 19-23)
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Symbols
The story features a few symbols that help highlight its themes and messages.
The cars mentioned in the story become symbols of their owners. Martha’s car (an old estate car) suggests that she is the one who carries the whole responsibility of her family, that she is the one overwhelmed with domestic chores and the demands of her husband, children, and guests. Martin’s sports car suggests the opposite. Just as his car sneaks out of traffic, Martin evades taking part in domestic chores and doesn’t accommodate anyone else’s needs.
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